Category: Writers Block
Did you ever happen to take notice
Believe this to be a truth if ye perceive
Just because a lawn is all fancy mowed,
Does not make for a person to be at home
Did you ever happen to take notice
Buds bloom mostly during the months of
The newness of the Springtime Season ~
Just the same though, little life too..
Awakening during a Harvest Moon ~
Take for example the Crop of Corn…
Did you ever happen to take notice
Bounce, bounce, bouncing floaters in
The days of the, Good Ol’e Summertime~
Just happen to glow so brightly as the
Sun dips low into the far off horizon ~
Did you ever happen to take notice
By lake’s shores when water laps at
The near-by shore..
Just how beautiful it is as Autumn’s leaf of
Maple’s green gives way to the rich shades of
The crimson hues..
Did you ever happen to take notice
By gentle glow of evening’s candlelight
Just how sweet it is to share ~
The tender moments passing…
Did you ever happen to take notice
Bells they ring in frosty tones
Just as the first cold, cold Winter’s flurries ~
Make like diamonds in the heaven’s clear,
So bright the stars doth shine
Did you ever happen to take notice
Bread with cheese, some basil, & thyme, while
Forgetting not the rosemary, are some of ~
Just the most joyous of blessings received
A Poetry Reading By:
~*Thunderous MidNight*~
Sunday evening September 23, 2007
There's a bit of a "Code" contained..
..perhaps you may locate it...maybe.
~*TMN*~
I don't get the code, but I like the description.
Bob
It is appreciated by myself
That you stopped by,
Taking the time to read ~
Giving comment.
~*Thunderous MidNight*~
extremely nice. I also don't get the code but excellent.
Thanks..
..Maybe. {?}
~*Thunderous MidNight*~
The "CODE," Ahh Yes, 'Tis NOT in regarding to, shall we say, of the pirates language, With Ahhh Capt, Balboa...
Rather 'Tis more so City-fied..
Thoughts: DETROIT, The Motor-City.
Windows now drawn in shades of..
Paper, powder blue paper ~
Like as in Dentist office,
The Bib ..... BEFORE
The DRILLing takes place.
{ouchie}
~*TMN*~
..then on driving in the neighborhood and taking stock of the building that holds my attention.. taking note windows on a side door, opposite the side where what I have always likened to name the Christmas tree side of the building.. long, old-like story, maybe another day I'll be given to share.. for now though , so puzzleing for now it is that spots the red circles have appeared.. perhaps a new type of graffiti ..?? for ano older style has shown itself on the back side of the building of olden days by where numerous the cars hav found their place to stop and rest for times too numerous to mention.. items too in a heap, seemingly all readied for disposal..maybe recycling..just maybe junk left by others thinking perhaps a this place on a disposal route.. So many the puzzleing question.. Time only will tell this story.
~*Thunderous MidNight*~
7:16 PM -- 10.26.07
I caught some grammar and spelling things, so I suggest fixing it. I also suggest fitting in some punctuation. Poetry requires punctuation. Look carefully at a good one. What do you notice? The beginning and end, there. Yes, punctuation and all that good stuff. So, this is what you need. A capital at the beginning of every single line, and at the end finish it nicely with a punctuation. If a . ? ... ! ; or : can't fit, insert in a , there.
Okay, yeah pretty good otherwise.